Those dreams have come unravelled;
Everything turned undone;
All this time thinking life is a riddle;
A race I’d already won.
Those days spent sick in waiting;
Those years I’ve been fading;
This isn’t what I thought it’d be;
Waiting for the life I dreamed it to be.
Winning is just an illusion of fame;
And friends sooner or later forget your name;
Sick of the clock’s constant ticking;
Life is nothing like I imagined while sleeping;
Zombies in daylight and vampires in starlight;
Forget who we are in search of the limelight.
It seems there is nothing out of place,
From the outside looking in,
But looking in the mirror at my own face,
Even I can’t see the tragedy within.
Of a girl’s lost and lonely soul wandering for miles,
Step upon step through every way,
Of every which day,
For a life beyond that grief-stricken smile…
“Zombies in daylight and vampires in starlight”
Really nice!
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And so is your lovely comment! I’m thankful for this sincere appreciation😊
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‘Even I can’t see the tragedy within.’ Thought provoking
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I was wondering if this one really revealed anything at all, so thank you a lot😊
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My absolute pleasure
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Your writing is stunning! Powerful prose which leaves the reader in deep thought. Beautiful and really really touching! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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I’ve written this from my perspective, as a teenager and believe me, I’m really appreciative and touched of your wonderful thoughts. It’s always a pleasure to see my work being appreciated😊😊
Thank you very very much😊 Means a lot, truly.
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This is amazing. The poem is lovely, and the image is stunning. A piece I wrote with a similar theme is “who will raise their voice for me?” On my blog. Thanks for this piece, and thanks for the follow!
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Thank you for reading my post and for this wonderful comment!
I’ll be sure to check it out!
Pleasure’s mine🌸
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What a brave soul my heart goes to this real life hero or heroine
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I guess this brave soul is most of us, as teenagers, when the truth dawns upon us and the reality of life gets in the way😔
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Yeah fools in innocence and wise with experience
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I’m still that fool I presume😋
I’m 17 that’s why😂
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Omg what a life to live youth and such a creative pure heart u will go a long way dear
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Thank you for your blessings😊
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Shiva I u rock
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Sorry u rock swift key
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Introductory image is beautiful and so does your peom, wishing you a great and successful new year!!
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Thank you very much for this wonderful comment of yours ma’am😊
Best wishes to you too🌸🌹
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I really like this, my blog is about publishing people’s weird dreams and I would love for you to write on my blog! I invite each and every one of you to share your dream on my blog!
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Thank you very much!! I’ll be sure to check it out!
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