I remember the vivid days as a child,
When I wanted to be just like you
But they lied when they smiled,
Telling me dreams always come true
So I chose to make it loud and clear,
I have to become better than you
Without knowing which road to steer,
I‘ll fight through whatever it takes to be better than you.
Those who write their own story can rhyme;
Following the original was never tough to do;
While soon enough, we all become mimes.
I will be my own inspiration and won’t relive you;
I‘ll become who I want to be in my own way,
And I’ll someday be better than you.
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Lovely poem
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Thank you for reading❤
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My pleasure 😇
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Simply BEAUTIFUL
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Thank you so much!
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Loved the words, be unique not a copy
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I couldn’t agree more! Thank you very much❤
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Thank you!
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Thanks for the visit 🙂
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Thanks for the visit
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Thank you the same! Your sketches are lovely!
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Awesome poem
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Thank you so much😊
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Poignant!
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Thank you😊!
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Ashwini I had got a notification of your post 657 but it is not appearing in the Reader. I too came to know from a couple of followers that my post of yesterday wasn’t there in their Reader.
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I’m sorry to hear that, Sir. Actually that post of mine was a ‘testing post’ for my upcoming one and it’s been deleted by me. Maybe refreshing the feed caused this technical anomaly for yours. Sorry for the inconvenience. And thank you for tuning in to my site!
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Ohki
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🥀💫❤️
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Thank you!!❤❤
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Beautiful poem
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Thank you!
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Nice poetry.
Teresa
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Thank you very much Teresa😊
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Very nice!!
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Thank you!!
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You’re welcome
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Woah.. this one I read..and this one is nice. 💯👏
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Thank you so much😊😊!!
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Great piece! Loved it so much. Thank you for sharing.
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Thanks to you😊
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❣👌
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Thank you😊❤
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You seem highly motivated of this is what you feel.
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Nice
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Thank you!
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