They do not seem to see it all;
To view me as a whole
Well past my skin they cannot look;
They are all blind to my soul
They only pay attention to
The swaying of my tree;
But how firm my roots are planted
They care not to see.
When I’m an oyster, hidden and plain,
With sand that’s gotten in;
They see the roughness of my shell,
Not the pearl I’ve made within.
Of the steps I’ve built and scaled;
They notice merely the creaks,
But when it comes to the height I’ve reached,
They blatantly ignore the towering peak
Alas, when they are in those mines
Filled with treasures to behold
They see no darkness, dirt or grime
They only see the gold…
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Wow!
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Thank you!!😊
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No one can see beyond what you are outside. 😍😍😍 Beautifully written.
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Exactly🙁! Like the Inside Out movie characters and Riley😂. Thank you❤🌹
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Haa! Exactly 😂
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Beautifully crafted words… the inner and the outer being of any soul…. loved this post…
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Yes! The inner you and your achievements! Thank you very much for this gracious comment🌹
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This was a great read, thank´s for stopping by my Craaaazy blog.
Very well written and meaningfull theme.
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My pleasure.
And thank you too😊
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Love this post!! Awesome
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That is so kind of you! Thank you jyoti!❤
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My pleasure Ashwini 💕💕
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Oh so beautiful Ashwini, and you have written it so accurately. People cannot see the goodness within others but gold that is held luring them in their own darkness and greatness.
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Wow. I must say that you’ve rightly gauged the depth of this poem. This was one of the spur-of-the-moments one which pretty much wrote itself. Thank you so much!😊
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Your welcome such a delight when I opened my WP this morning.
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This makes me feel so happy😢😊.
Thank you a ton🌸!
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Beautifully and powerfully written 🌸
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Oh thank you so much for your kind words💕🌹!
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So deep, so true, so thoughtful
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Your comment is truly appreciated😊
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Great piece!
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Thank you!!
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You’re Welcome!
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Wow. I can’t fully explain how much I love this… So I guess I just give it my heart ♡
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Aww😢 That is such a sweeeett statement. Thank you so very much❤. Truly appreciated🌹
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much, Adithya❤
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Nice! Keep it up
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Thank you!!
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Beautifully penned and expressed. Wow, seeing beyond. Outstanding 💜🌸
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Thank you for this gracious comment🌹💖
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You are quite welcome 😊
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Your blog is well worth the read.
Thank you for following me. I’ll be sure to follow your amazing writing.
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That is so very kind on your part! Thank you very much for the privilege❤
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Love it so much! as usual, keep it up :
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Thank you so much!
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Lovely, different , thnx to share
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Thank you!
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