There’s a shooting star!
Catch it before it falls
Make a wish upon it
Maybe it’ll answer your call
You stay and you wait
Another moment, another day
Hoping…
But the star dust has long faded away
Leaving empty promises behind,
In this plain night sky.
The stars still twinkle
But they’re only lies
They tell lies with their beauty
Cratered in the moon
The comet came and passed,
But it left too soon
Now reminiscent of that moment
The flash across the sky
Though many years have passed,
They still tell the same lie
You curse the sky to never look up again
The years passed and you bore that pain
But in the last moment
You take your last glance
And you wish to the sky
“Give me another chance…”
This is gorgeous – what imagery you weave in these words.
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Your comment is truly appreciated. Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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I really enjoyed this – beautiful!
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That is so kind of you, thank you!
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Great poem! In life, we all feel like taking a second look.
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Yes, that’s true. Thank you for your lovely words.
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Great post 🙂
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Thank you😁!
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So beautifully penned. Loved this
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Thank you so much!
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This is amazing! Yes we wish to the sky give me another chance!👍
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Thank you so much for this lovely comment!🌹
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It is my pleasure!
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A great poem! 😄👏
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Thanks for following my posts. See you soon- on my site, or yours
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My pleasure😊
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Wow… I will stalk your blog you have so beautiful works I have no words to say how amazing your poems ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
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Oh my God! That is actually heartwarming. I can’t thank you enough for this sincere appreciation💘.
Love, Ashwini😊🌹❤
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Here’s to always another chance. Enjoying your work.
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Thank you so much!!
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Simply beautiful ❤️
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Thanks for the positive feedback😊
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Wonderful 🌠
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Thank you for this appreciation🌸
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