He is alone
Though he is in a crowded room;
He is happy
Still he’s headed towards his doom;
He is lost
But he knows his way back home;
He is speechless
Yet he’s talking on the phone;
He is sad
But he knows the worst is done;
He is in the dark
Although he’s standing under the sun;
He is here
But yet so far away;
He is quiet
But he has so much to say;
He is falling
Though he’s standing on the ground;
He is screaming
But no one hears a sound;
He is wounded
Yet he’s not bleeding;
He is following
But he seems to be leading;
He is telling the truth
But still, he’s lying;
He is dead
Yet he’s alive;
He is a loner in life…
That’s a Father
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Wow!!😂
You just hit the bull’s eye!!
Thank you for the read😊
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Oh wow this is pulled at my heart. Beautifully written.
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Thank you very much for this wonderful comment and for reading😊
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It was my pleasure.
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Add my WOW too!
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Haha😂😂
That is very kind of you🌹 Thank you very much for reading!!
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Love and best wishes.
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I have been observing and going through your poems recently. Your poetry is really very good. 💖💕
This one is written very well.😍
Would you let me know you are in which grade? I m eager to know! 😆
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Aww I can’t thank you enough for these kind words Bidisha!
Of course!😂
I’m a mere, clumsy 17 year old female in 12th grade😊
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Nice post, nice style Ashwini
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Thank you very much for reading and dropping this wonderful comment Mr Kurian!
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You are most welcome Ashwini
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The contradictions of loneliness beautifully expressed, Ashwini.
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That’s an awesome feedback! Thank you so very much for reading my post. Means a lot!
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You are kindly welcome.
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He is wounded
Yet he is not bleeding 👌👌
👏👏Gud one Bhai
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Sorry u r not Bhai 😂😂he* effect 😂😂😇
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Hahaha😂😂
You are not the first one, don’t worry😂
I’m not surprised at all😂
Even when I use ‘she’, I’m addressed as ‘he’.
BTW, thank you very much for reading Nimish and for dropping this hilarious yet awesome comment😊
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Yaar 😇Ashwini is a unisex name …photo bhi nahi lagaya tumne…. comment section se pata Chala u r ladki😂😂
Btw
All the very best for ur board’s exam..
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Omg mate, you are so funny!😂
I mean I thought Ashwin was the male version; I didn’t know Ashwini is a unisex name😂😂 Existential crisis jeez😂 Hail the comment section!! The gender anonymity is becoming a real issue😂
Thank you very much for your good wishes Nimish!😊
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✌️
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Regardless of age, this is beautiful. However, the fact that you are still so young and yet so insightful makes it all the more impressive.
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That is so very kind of you Cubby, really!🌹 Your words are always so powerful and meaningful to me! I earnestly thank you for these encouraging feedbacks😊
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Love! Love! Love! This is so intriguing, so painful yet so beautiful and relatable. Great job!
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Thank you very much for reading and for this wonderfully sincere appreciation Alyshia!
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This is beautiful in a subtle way. Good wishes!!😊
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Thank you very much for stopping by and for these lovely words Ramyani😊!
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Very interesting!
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Thank you very much for stopping by my post and reading!
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You’re welcome!
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So true, thank you 🙂
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I should thank you for reading😊
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Brava!
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Thank you!!
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Reblogged this on BrewNSpew and commented:
Sharing an awesome poem by Ashwini.B –
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That is so kind of you, Eugenia. Thank you for this wonderful response!!😊
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
An outstanding piece by Ashwini ….
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Thank you so much Reena!😊😊
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I loved the piece 🙂
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The irony of being alone in a crowd.Hits right in the heart. Beautifully penned
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I’m so happy you liked it! Thank you verryy much for this wonderful comment Mathav!!
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Reblogged this on Antonella Lallo.
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nice one! I love the contrast between each paired line
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Thank you Sir!
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Beautiful! For a moment this carried me to a place l didn’t want to come out of. I just wanted to read on… love it!❤💙
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This really means a lot! I’m glad you liked it! Thank you for this sincere appreciation💕💕
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I am an extremely lonely person even when I am with others. I could so relate to this. Such a beautiful way of capturing loneliness
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Thank you very much for reading!!
Hope you learn to start enjoying your very own company; you’d not be alone even for a single moment!😊🌸
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Thank you. I appreciate that
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You captured the paradoxes beautifully.
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Thank you very much for reading!!
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Sad and beautiful!
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Thank you for such wonderful feedback!!😊
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It was my pleasure
🌹
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He absorbs everything yet doesn’t utter a single word. He is a dad.
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You got that so right mate!
Thank you very much for reading my post!😊
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He is a Hero😍such a nice post👌
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He is!! ‘He’ is that every individual who relates to this poem. Thank you very much for reading!!😊❤
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He is a man who has respect and class and is above all
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Enjoyed seeing where your words would take me. Let’s hope that none of us feel that alone today. Have a great day!
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Let’s hope that none of us feel this alone every day. I sincerely appreciate your sweet comment. Thank you very much😊😊
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I really like this, it sounds like me !
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Ohh noo😔 It should absolutely not!
But thank you very much for reading😊
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You’re welcome 😇
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Loneliness well explained…
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Thank you!😊
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Wow
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❤❤
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Toll !!!! !!!. very nice, thanks to you !!!
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Thank you for reading!!
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thank you too !!(((*L*)))
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